I'm now in desperate need of English speakers' opinion. It'd be truly appreciated if you could give me a simple and straightforward opinion about the English writing itself for the excerpts below, aside from what they say.
Once I get some opinions, I'm going to tell you where the excerpts came from, what I thought of them and WHY I needed to ask you to read them and give me your thought.
Thanks in advance(@^^)/~~~
You're also welcome to give me your words if not being a native speaker of English. Hope it's not too much of a bother.
"It is important to think about ideal qualities in a pet. As a companion, being cute may be one of the most important elements in choosing a dog. People usually feel comforted with a lovely dog. At the same time, cute dogs surely cheer up their owners and their families.
Another important point is about the duties of a pet owner. Dogs are not toys and it is our duty to look after them every day. Even if we keep a tiny dog, walking it regularly is a must. Otherwise, a dog gets fat easily and it is a great grief to see sick dogs.
Last of all, be careful of restrictions against pets in buildings and apartments. Even if keeping a dog is allowed in our apartment, it is preferable to have a quiet one. A subdued dog may be preferable for the elderly people who have trouble walking.
It is significant to choose a cute dog and walk it every day while we think of restrictions against pets in our apartments."
"Global warming is a serious problem affecting many countries. It is a must to decrease emissions of so-called greenhouse gases by reducing use of oil and gasoline. One thing is that developed countries could help developing countries by giving a fuel-efficient technology to their automobile makers.
Indeed, air pollution is getting worse and worse in Asian countries. More and more Asian people use motorbikes or small cars in their daily life. Also, gasoline used in their cars is well-known for its bad quality. It is a tragedy to see them riding on a motorbike in a traffic jam.
Finally, it is pointed out that laws and regulations should be enforced effectively in many developing countries. Especially, some Asian countries like China and Thailand have built manufacturing factories in local areas. Also, some developed countries move their domestic factories to low-waged countries."